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I am Fallen; your Life
Flashes
Before My eyes
Your Thoughts, Your
Motivations, are lost
On Me. If You are the purple,
The Pink, The Magenta,
I am the Deep,
Void
Of flamboyance.
The myriad of colours you represent
Confuse me;
You pushed Me
I fell
You walked away
And You will not look back
My eyes bore into Your shoulders,
And though You burn,
Though You smoulder – You seem calm,
You will not look back –
Perhaps
You are Fallen – Your life
Is Black|
©2004-2009 ~solitarily-bound
:iconsolitarily-bound:

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AM I ALONE??? I sure hope not!

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I really enjoy the enjambment (thanks alex ;))
The colour part is really interesting.
Renee, I really like your poetry, its even better that i'v never read half of it. Make sit more exciting...

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